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Good foundation
You covered the core idea, but your conclusion came late.
Four dimensions
Weights 35 / 30 / 20 / 15Key information
Missed “people don’t change habits easily”01:31
Structure
Conclusion only at 00:4800:48
Efficiency
2 repeats and a lead-in01:02
Fluency
One 4-second pause hurts clarity01:15
Next time, lead with your conclusion, then give the three reasons.
“Good products still fail, because timing, distribution and the strength of the need matter just as much.”
Based on 00:48 Your conclusion only appears here
Evidence
Tap to hear your own words“um, so this article is mainly about, um, why good products fail”
Restating the title — you can cut it
“timing is really important, timing is, like, really important, the timing”
Same point, three times
“distribution… (4-second pause) …people have to see it”
A 4-second pause — listeners lose the thread
“and then the need, it's about whether people need it or not”
Mentions need, but misses “people don’t switch just because it’s better”
Key points
Covered 2 / 3Timing: too early or too late both fail
Distribution: unseen means nonexistent
Need: if it isn’t urgent, people won’t switch
Model answer
ReferenceOne way to say it using “Conclusion first”. Use your own words — don’t memorise it.
Good products still fail, because timing, distribution and need matter as much as quality. First, too early means educating a whole market, and too late means customers are taken. Second, if people never hear about it, it may as well not exist. Third, if the problem isn’t urgent, people live with it rather than switch.
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