Today’s session complete
Shorter, but a key point went missing.
Your second take was 58 seconds shorter, but it dropped “people don’t switch just because it’s better.”
First take7202:22
Second take7001:24
This session -258 s shorter
+45XP
13Day streak +1
72Ability ±0
Lv.6 Clear Speaker
285 / 350 XP
First take+15Second take+20Session complete+10Improvement bonus (when take two scores higher)+10
This week
Complete 5 retells
4/5Complete 3 compressed retells
2/3Follow last advice 3 times
2/3Next focus
Keep the caveats
Keep the article’s conditions; don’t make it sound more absolute.