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  "id": "asm_r1",
  "attempt_id": "att_r1",
  "round": 1,
  "overall": 72,
  "band": "clear",
  "band_label": "Clear",
  "summary": "You opened with the conclusion. The three reasons could be more distinct.",
  "dimensions": {
    "key_info": {
      "score": 76,
      "note": "Missed “people don’t change habits easily”",
      "evidence_ids": [
        "ev_3"
      ],
      "insufficient_evidence": false
    },
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      "note": "Conclusion in the first sentence",
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        "ev_a1"
      ],
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    },
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      "score": 61,
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        "ev_2",
        "ev_4"
      ],
      "insufficient_evidence": false
    },
    "fluency": {
      "score": 73,
      "note": "One 4-second pause hurts clarity",
      "evidence_ids": [
        "ev_5"
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    }
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      "key_point_id": "kp1",
      "text": "Timing: too early or too late both fail",
      "covered": true,
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    },
    {
      "key_point_id": "kp2",
      "text": "Distribution: unseen means nonexistent",
      "covered": true,
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    },
    {
      "key_point_id": "kp3",
      "text": "Need: if it isn’t urgent, people won’t switch",
      "covered": false,
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    }
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    "evidence_id": "ev_2"
  },
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      "end_ms": 9000,
      "transcript_excerpt": "Good products still fail, because timing, distribution and need all matter.",
      "note": "You opened with the conclusion",
      "kind": "good_example"
    },
    {
      "id": "ev_2",
      "start_ms": 62000,
      "end_ms": 69000,
      "transcript_excerpt": "timing is really important, timing is, like, really important, the timing",
      "note": "Same point, three times",
      "kind": "repetition"
    },
    {
      "id": "ev_3",
      "start_ms": 91000,
      "end_ms": 100000,
      "transcript_excerpt": "and then the need, it's about whether people need it or not",
      "note": "Mentions need, but misses “people don’t switch just because it’s better”",
      "kind": "missing_point"
    },
    {
      "id": "ev_4",
      "start_ms": 12000,
      "end_ms": 18000,
      "transcript_excerpt": "um, so this article is mainly about, um, why good products fail",
      "note": "Restating the title — you can cut it",
      "kind": "filler"
    },
    {
      "id": "ev_5",
      "start_ms": 75000,
      "end_ms": 81000,
      "transcript_excerpt": "distribution… (4-second pause) …people have to see it",
      "note": "A 4-second pause — listeners lose the thread",
      "kind": "pause"
    }
  ],
  "confidence": "high",
  "confidence_note": null,
  "rubric_version": "rubric-v1",
  "model_ref": "anthropic/claude-sonnet-4-5",
  "created_at": "2026-10-17T00:21:10Z",
  "comparison": null
}